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	<updated>2008-08-28T18:44:14Z</updated>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 004: Fifteen Minutes</title>
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			<name>Jordan Castillo Price</name>
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		<updated>2008-07-02T14:20:04Z</updated>
		<published>2008-07-02T14:20:04Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[I like your backup method! I also save multiple copies of my stories, but the way I do it is to open the document and "save as" before I start writing on a given day, and append the date in the file name. So I'd have greatstory0628.doc and greatstory0702.doc which would mean I worked on it June 28 and July 2. Just in case a weirdness sneaks in and I want to go back and look at a prior copy.<br><br>I just got a new Asus eee computer running Linux, and Open Office looks really great on it. I haven't done more than a test page but it ran really smooth, looks good, works quickly. The keyboard will take some getting used to, but even after just having it a day and dinking around with it intermittently, I can see that I will adjust.<br><br>Thanks for the tip on keeping the flash drive small. (Which I do anyway just because I'm cheap. Quill.com has a 1GB for about $6 right now on clearance. I get one every time I order office supplies for the day job.)<br>]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 004: Fifteen Minutes</title>
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			<name>Jeremy</name>
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		<updated>2008-07-02T09:01:42Z</updated>
		<published>2008-07-02T09:01:42Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[I run Open Office from the flash drive when I use a PC, and I run an installed version of Open Office at home.  And by the way, it is NOT a ridiculous question!<br /><br />In regards to the flash drive, I am also backing up my work on a regular basis.  What I do is this: First, I've named my working folder to today's date, like "Writing 2008-07-02" or whatever.  Then next I copy into my "Documents" folder on my Mac.  In my Documents folder I now have several copies of my writing, backed up at different intervals on different dates.  I bought my current flash drive from Target (of all places) for $17.  My recommendation would be to keep it at 2 GB, because I've noticed that my work machine won't recognize any drive above 4 GB.]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 007: Reap the Rewards</title>
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			<name>Jeremy</name>
			<uri>http://sukobiru.wordpress.com</uri>
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		<updated>2008-06-26T22:45:51Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-26T22:45:51Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[1. I think you would be a valuable addition to any con.  I encourage you to speak if you get the opportunity.<br /><br />2. I signed up for the newsletter<br /><br />3. I set up my blog space.  Actually, I reopened a blog space that I created a long time ago but left dormant.  Time to get back into it<br /><br />REWARDS:<br />Another good discussion.  For me, a reward would be playing my Wii for purely selfish reasons.  I cannot play until I hit my wordcount goal.  AND if I go over and go crazy and do another 3k day, this doesn't mean I can slack for the next two days.]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 006: Setting Goals</title>
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			<name>Jeremy</name>
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		<updated>2008-06-26T22:28:15Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-26T22:28:15Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[Three Goals....<br /><br />1) Establish a blog, with updates every two days for three weeks<br /><br />2) Work on story "Point of the Sword" on Mon, Wed, and Fri, 1000 words a day.<br /><br />3) Work on story "Random Sanctum" (working title) on Tues and Thurs, 1000 words a day<br /><br />4) Have fun on weekends -- write one-offs, short stories wherever my mind goes.]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 004: Fifteen Minutes</title>
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		<id>tag:packingheat.net,2008-06-25:1147805</id>
		<author>
			<name>Jordan Castillo Price</name>
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		<updated>2008-06-25T10:57:59Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-25T10:57:59Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[I've heard of running Open Office from a flash drive but I've never done it. That sounds like an excellent way of keeping your writing separate from your job stuff.<br><br>I think it's pretty common for writers to have day jobs that don't require continual, undivided attention. It leaves them fresh to work on their writing, or to at least think about their writing during the day--I'm thinking of Harvey Pekar and Charles Bukowski. I'm sure there are many more.<br><br>I have a high-intensity day job but I cut my hours down to half time to prevent burnout. I'm glad I had the flexibility to choose the number of hours I want to work. I'd rather live as cheaply as possible and have less of my time go to someone else.<br><br>A question about Open Office: do you run it from your flash drive on both Windows and Mac, or is it running from Windows on your flash drive, and then you have it installed for Mac at home and you run it off your computer? Sorry if that's a ridiculous question. Cross-platform performance makes my brain hurt. (Also, when my mom calls me and asks me what's wrong with her PC when 1. I can't see it and 2. I know next to nothing about PCs.)<br>]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 005: Get Random</title>
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		<author>
			<name>Jordan Castillo Price</name>
		</author>
		<updated>2008-06-25T10:44:39Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-25T10:44:39Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[Wow, this is incredibly detailed. I'll admit, I would be tempted to ditch the story prompt at the sight of "football player" ('cos I really hate sports. Really.) But you've taken the "nervous habit" thing and totally run with it.<br><br>I'll bet you would really have a blast writing your poet, because she'd come with so much voice. She could be somber, or playful, or precognitive, all with her poetic styling. I'm not saying she'd be easy--in fact, I think she'd be hard to do well. But she'd be so worth it that I'll bet readers would be itching for her to make her appearance.<br><br>I haven't played on Seventh Sanctum in a long time. I'm developing a new story world and I need to write some practice scenes so I can see who my characters are. Maybe a little randomness is just the ticket for me to use in my sketches.<br>]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 004: Fifteen Minutes</title>
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		<id>tag:packingheat.net,2008-06-24:1146546</id>
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			<name>Jeremy</name>
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		<updated>2008-06-24T22:34:29Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-24T22:34:29Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[I am lucky in that my job allows me to schedule my work each day, and as long as I keep up with my clients and turn everything in on time, the rest of the time is my own.  Many of my co-workers play online games, but I am taking the time to write.  I have a flash drive with Open Office installed on it, so nothing is ever saved on the work computer -- I run the app from the drive and save all of my documents to the flash drive.  When i get home I have all my work waiting for me.  At home I run a Mac Powerbook, and the office is Windows XP, but Open Office runs nicely on both platforms.]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 005: Get Random</title>
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			<name>Jeremy</name>
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		<updated>2008-06-24T22:27:23Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-24T22:27:23Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[RANDOM IDEA: This story takes place in a village on a war-scarred planet. In it, a traveler searching for truth is forced to work with an altruistic poet. What starts as a one-night stand soon turns into true love - all thanks to a betrayal. What role will a football player who has several nervous habits play in their relationship?<br /><br />   I am thinking this is like a Flash Gordon type of story.  Yes, Flash has been done to death, reinvented at least 3 times since the 30's, and is little more than a comic book that never really could break past Batman and Superman and the X-Men.  He could be this fabled hero guy who in real life is just the poster-boy for a revolution who isn't all he is billed.  In real life, he is challenged and constantly is trying to compensate for a poor self-image.  His nervous habits: he smokes (a lot), he must always walk and even number of steps and will be upset if he loses his count, everything he does must have an even number to it (chews his food 4 or 6 times before swallowing, never 5).  In the rebel camp where he lives, all of the plans must have an even number of steps, and the people making those plans get frustrated that they have to make up an extra step at times just to satisfy their figurehead.<br />   The poet is a woman who speaks in rhymes whenever she can.  This appeals to the football figurehead as it is a very even speech pattern.  She is completely self-less and is incapable of telling a lie.  Brilliant, she sees patterns in things and events and will often reveal the future, but because she speaks in rhymes and metaphors this is often lost to those listening.<br />   The traveler is the story, as it begins with him and ends with him.  He is a roaming samurai (because I've always wanted to do a samurai story) who is an expert in warfare who has no master because he seeks the truth about conflict and the source of human desire to wage war.  He fights only worthy causes in conflict.  He's been roaming for two years now, and heard of the rebellion from the poet in a seedy bar – he saved her life, they had a one night stand, and then he searched her out for six months when she left.  The “2 years” appeals to the footballer, but it is the beautiful truth spoken by the poet that captured the warrior's heart.]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 004: Fifteen Minutes</title>
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			<name>Jordan Castillo Price</name>
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		<updated>2008-06-18T11:42:40Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-18T11:42:40Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[379 sounds just about right. Imagine if you did only that every day--you'd have 2800 words per week, which is a good size for a short story in the erotica market, or a chapter of a novel if you're writing novel-length.<br><br>I'm totally jealous of you building up steam and getting up to 3k. That's a fantasy writing day for me! (I'm at 700 so far today and I'm hoping for 3k. My guy's going out to catch a band later, so who knows, maybe I can hit my goal if I work into the night.)<br>]]></content>
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		<title>Comment on Packing Heat 004: Fifteen Minutes</title>
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		<id>tag:packingheat.net,2008-06-17:1127924</id>
		<author>
			<name>Jeremy</name>
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		<updated>2008-06-17T23:36:56Z</updated>
		<published>2008-06-17T23:36:56Z</published>
		<content type="html"><![CDATA[OK, so i hit 379 words in 15 minutes.  But I couldn't stop at the 15 minute mark, and in two hours while at work i ended up with 2985 words.]]></content>
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